Fordham University's wording, checked October 26, 2026Your choice of one of three short response questions (300 words max) is meant to help you reflect on your personal growth and community impact. How will you continue to grow and impact our communities at Fordham and in New York City?“At Fordham, we expect students to care for and engage with their communities and be active citizens for positive change. Please share an experience you had that caused you to develop a new perspective, change your point of view, and/or empower you to take an action or be courageous. Your response should include examples of your personal growth (e.g., what did you learn, did your point of view change, did you develop new skills or strengths?).”
How to approach it
- 1Show the experience, then the growth with a concrete before and after.
- 2Fordham asks for examples: name the new skill or strength.
A structure that works
One way to shape this answer. It describes moves, not sentences: the words have to be yours.
- 1The experience.
- 2What changed in your view or your actions.
- 3Specific examples of the growth.
- 4How it shapes the citizen you want to be at Fordham.
Where the 300 words go
| Part | Words |
|---|---|
| The moment or example | about 120 |
| What it shows or changed | about 110 |
| Why it matters, or what you bring | about 80 |
Mistakes to avoid
- Growth claimed but not shown.
The checklist our grader uses for this question
When you check your Fordham answers, this answer is read against these 5 areas. Each comes back Met, Partly or Missing with a quote from your draft as evidence, and together with the 300 words limit they set its readiness verdict.
| Area | What a reader looks for |
|---|---|
| Answers the question | The opening sentences answer what was asked, plainly, before background or a hook; every part of a multi-part question is answered. |
| The community, concretely | The community is defined by a detail only a member would know (a place, a ritual, a person), not a label. |
| Your part in it | What the applicant personally did or does in it is on the page, with "I" statements. |
| What it gave you and what you will bring | It says how the community shaped the applicant and connects that to how they will take part in the college's community. |
| Fordham's ask | It connects the answer to Fordham's community and does every part of what Fordham's question asks. |
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