University of Pennsylvania's wording, checked October 26, 2026“How will you explore community at Penn? Consider how Penn will help shape your perspective, and how your experiences and perspective will help shape Penn.”
How to approach it
- 1Name specific communities you would join or start, and check they exist.
- 2Tie each to an experience you already have.
- 3Make both directions explicit; most drafts cover only what Penn gives you.
A structure that works
One way to shape this answer. It describes moves, not sentences: the words have to be yours.
- 1One or two Penn communities you would take part in, and why.
- 2The experience that makes you want them.
- 3How Penn would change your perspective.
- 4What you would give back to that community.
Where the 200 words go
| Part | Words |
|---|---|
| The moment or example | about 80 |
| What it shows or changed | about 70 |
| Why it matters, or what you bring | about 50 |
Mistakes to avoid
- "Diverse student body" with no specifics.
- Only academics.
The checklist our grader uses for this question
When you check your Penn answers, this answer is read against these 5 areas. Each comes back Met, Partly or Missing with a quote from your draft as evidence, and together with the 50-200 words limit they set its readiness verdict.
| Area | What a reader looks for |
|---|---|
| Answers the question | The opening sentences answer what was asked, plainly, before background or a hook; every part of a multi-part question is answered. |
| The community, concretely | The community is defined by a detail only a member would know (a place, a ritual, a person), not a label. |
| Your part in it | What the applicant personally did or does in it is on the page, with "I" statements. |
| What it gave you and what you will bring | It says how the community shaped the applicant and connects that to how they will take part in the college's community. |
| Penn's ask | Covers both directions Penn asks for: how Penn will shape the applicant and how the applicant will shape Penn. |
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Questions
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