Harvard University's wording, checked October 26, 2026“Briefly describe any of your extracurricular activities, employment experience, travel, or family responsibilities that have shaped who you are.”
How to approach it
- 1Pick the one that changed you most, not the one with the biggest title.
- 2Give a detail the activities list cannot hold.
- 3Say what it changed in you.
- 4Family responsibilities and paid work count as much as clubs here: Harvard names both in the question.
A structure that works
One way to shape this answer. It describes moves, not sentences: the words have to be yours.
- 1One activity, job or family responsibility, named in the first sentence.
- 2A specific moment or routine inside it that the activities list has no room for.
- 3What it changed in how you act or think.
- 4A last line that shows the change still at work.
Where the 150 words go
| Part | Words |
|---|---|
| The moment or example | about 60 |
| What it shows or changed | about 50 |
| Why it matters, or what you bring | about 40 |
Mistakes to avoid
- Restating your activities list.
- Covering three activities in 150 words.
- Describing the organization instead of what you did in it.
The checklist our grader uses for this question
When you check your Harvard answers, this answer is read against these 5 areas. Each comes back Met, Partly or Missing with a quote from your draft as evidence, and together with the 150 words limit they set its readiness verdict.
| Area | What a reader looks for |
|---|---|
| Answers the question | The opening sentences answer what was asked, plainly, before background or a hook; every part of a multi-part question is answered. |
| One activity, your role | It is about one activity, job or responsibility, and the applicant's own role in it is clear. |
| A detail beyond the list | It gives a concrete moment or detail the 150-character activities list cannot hold. |
| Why it matters | It shows what the activity means to the applicant and the difference it makes to them or others. |
| Harvard's ask | It does every part of what Harvard's question asks, in the college's own terms. |
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Questions
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