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The last of the University of California's eight Personal Insight Questions is the only open one: "Beyond what has already been shared in your application, what do you believe makes you a strong candidate for admissions to the University of California?"
You answer four of the eight, in up to 350 words each, and UC gives every question equal consideration. Question 8 is the right choice when the most important thing about you has no home in questions 1 to 7. It is the wrong choice when you would use it to summarize everything else.
What UC PIQ 8 is asking
| Words in the question | What they mean for your answer |
|---|---|
| Beyond what has already been shared | The answer must add something. A reader who has seen your other three answers, your activities and your courses should learn something new |
| What makes you a strong candidate | You are asked to make a case, with evidence, not only to tell a story |
Two phrases in the question do most of the work.
- UC's guidance puts it this way: if there is anything you want UC to know about you but did not find a question or a place in the application to say it, this is your chance.
- It suggests asking yourself what you have not shared that will highlight a skill, talent, challenge or opportunity and help UC know you better.
- It also says: do not be afraid to brag a little.
What belongs in PIQ 8, and what does not
| Fits question 8 | Does not fit |
|---|---|
| A quality or experience that none of questions 1 to 7 asks about, such as a job, a family responsibility or a long personal project | A summary of your other three answers |
| A side of you the rest of the application does not show | Your activities list rewritten as sentences |
| One or two qualities, each backed by an example | A list of achievements with no example |
| What you would bring to a UC campus as a student | Praise for one named campus |
The last row follows from how the application works. One UC application goes to every campus you choose, so an answer about why you love one of them is read by all the others. Write about what you would contribute at the University of California in general.
PIQ 8 or the additional comments field?
| What you want to say | Where it goes |
|---|---|
| A strength, with an example, that shows who you are | PIQ 8 |
| An explanation of a gap, a schedule change or a grade that needs context | Additional comments |
| Something unclear in your courses or activities | Additional comments |
| A challenge and how you responded to it | Question 5, or question 4 if it was an educational barrier |
The UC application also has an additional comments field, and applicants often confuse the two. UC describes that field as a place for issues you did not have the opportunity to discuss elsewhere, and says it should not be an essay: it is for noting unusual circumstances or anything that might be unclear in other parts of the application.
What a strong PIQ 8 answer shows
| Area | What the reader should find |
|---|---|
| Direct answer | The first two or three sentences say what makes you a strong candidate, plainly |
| Something new | It adds what the rest of the application does not already show |
| Evidence | The claim is backed by at least one concrete example or detail |
| What you would bring | It is clear what you would contribute at UC, without naming one campus |
| Not a résumé | It stays on one or two qualities instead of listing achievements |
These are the five things our review checks an answer to question 8 for.
How to structure 350 words
Before you write, read your other three answers and your activities list and cross out anything they already cover. Whatever is left is your material for question 8. If nothing is left, choose a different fourth question.
- 1Name the quality, in about 40 words. Say it directly: the reader should not have to wait for it.
- 2Show it, in about 180 words: one example with specific detail, such as what you did, how often and what it cost you.
- 3Add a second, shorter piece of evidence if you have one, in about 60 words. It shows the quality is a habit and not a single event.
- 4Say what it means for you as a UC student, in about 70 words: how you would use it in a classroom, a lab, a job or a community there.
Openings: a summary versus something new
I believe I am a strong candidate for the University of California because I am hardworking, dedicated and passionate, as my grades and activities show.
Nothing in my application shows that I have translated for my grandmother at every medical appointment since I was eleven, and that is where I learned to stay calm when I do not understand something yet.
These lines are invented, about students who do not exist.
- The first repeats what the application already says and gives three adjectives any applicant could claim.
- The second tells the reader it is new, gives a fact with a duration, and points at a quality that matters in a classroom.
Mistakes that weaken a PIQ 8 answer
- Summarizing. "As my other answers show" is a sign the answer adds nothing.
- Listing. UC's writing tips warn that a list of accomplishments, activities, awards or work lessens the impact of your words.
- Flattering a campus. The answer goes to every campus on your application.
- Explaining a problem. Context for a grade or a gap belongs in additional comments.
- Being too modest. UC invites you to brag a little. A claim backed by an example is not arrogance.
- Pasting in a Common App essay. A 650-word essay cut to 350 rarely answers this question. Rebuild it around the claim you are making.
Before you submit
UC does not accept changes to the Personal Insight Questions once the application is submitted. Check the answer is at or under 350 words and read it straight after your other three: if it repeats one of them, it is not finished.
You can have the answer reviewed first. Choose UC Personal Insight on the review form and pick question 8: you get a score out of 100, the five-point checklist above, a readiness verdict and a note on every sentence, in 5 to 10 minutes. Your first review is free, then each answer is one token ($4.99, less in a bundle). We never write or rewrite your answer.
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